First Draft

This is our first version of the thriller. We decided to keep the majority of shots and the background music. We asked the teachers for advice and we received constructive criticism from three teachers. Each of them gave us an idea of how to make the ending look better. I agreed that it was not as good as the rest, therefore me and Jake went out to film another time just to change the shots of me and make the ending more professional and thriller like. The finished version will also contain an Ident that we did not have at the time when I exported this video. Jake has created an Ident that fits well with the theme of the film.